Saturday, October 12, 2019

OctPoWriMo 2019: Day 12: Painted Black

Image by kalhh from Pixabay

paint it black played the night before you
slipped into shadow, not unexpected
it was a long struggle to get to that good night
I know you had to go to bring back what you are
you were not that lost thing left behind
I have been angry at you since you left
which makes me angry at me
because I know it isn't fair
you deserved to be set free from the prison
that your body had become
fly high unpolished angel
you were not elegant, but to me you were beautiful

~Cie~


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5 comments:

  1. I love the bitter-sweetness that your poem portrays

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  2. I love the darkness and confusion in this. It's very real.

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    1. All too, I'm afraid. I've lost several people to dementia in the past ten years. (My father was the first, he will be gone nine years at the end of this November.) It's rather like watching them die twice.

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