Wednesday, October 23, 2019

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Wednesday #2: October Beach


October beach
in all the footprints
the tread of shoes
I say we kick off our shoes
let the cool sand soothe our feet

~Jane & Cie~


Notes:
The Hokku stanza was written by Jane Reichhold (1937 -2016). The Akegu (two-line) stanza was created by me.

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2 comments:

  1. Kim M. RussellOctober 24, 2019 at 2:03 AM

    Good idea, Cara! I love the feel of cool sand between my toes.

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    1. Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost October 24, 2019 at 11:22 AM

      I know it would only be nice for a few minutes, but it sounds really pleasant to think about it.

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