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a clam
torn from its shell
departing autumn
cold stabs the soul like a knife
I retreat inside my shell
~Basho & Cie~
Notes:
The Hokku stanza of this Tan Renga was created by Matsuo Basho (1644 - 1694). The Ageku (two-line) stanza was written by me.
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