The only place where you can dream
Living here is not what it seems
--Iron Maiden, Strange World I just want to walk right out of this world 'cause everybody has a poison heart. --The Ramones
Wednesday, April 3, 2024
April PAD Challenge and NaPoWriMo Prompts 2024 Days 2 and 3
Saturday, November 4, 2023
Remembering: An Elegy For My Father
Remembering the day when your turn came
I knew that things would never be the same.
You went over the top on holidays
Our home was filled with the spirit of praise.
I always remember those Christmas scenes
I catch glimpses of childhood in my dreams.
It's now been thirteen years that you've been gone
The grief is not as sharp but still as strong.
notes
https://dversepoets.com/2023/11/02/mtb-lets-lament-without-the-lachrymose/
Topic:
someone close to you
someone vaguely known e.g a neighbour
someone totally unknown except through deeds or writings eg a dead poet perhaps like the recently deceased Louise Gluck
a group of people (eg as in Gray’s “Elegy written in a country churchyard”)
Form: Must include these three elements, ordered thus:
lament –expressing grief and sorrow
praise – admiration of the deceased
consolation and solace
It can be written as 3 distinct sections/stanzas or melded together but keeping the order above
Style: The elegy can be written in any metre the poet chooses.
Those of you who prefer more stricture and guidance might like to try the Elegiac metre:
rhyming coupleted lines (AA;BB;CC etc though not separated into couplets)
written in dactylic hexameter and pentameter
The last two lines aren't in strict keeping with the form, but I wanted them there.
https://girlieontheedge1.wordpress.com/2023/11/01/its-thursdays-six-sentence-story-link-up-62/
The prompt word is turn. Since I can't play by the rules and my poem has eight lines instead of six, I won't be linking up this time.
https://www.writersdigest.com/write-better-poetry/2023-november-pad-chapbook-challenge-day-4
Write a catching poem.
You will find the word catch in the above poem.
Something has been vaguely steaming my ham for quite some time. It isn't a big deal, it's just one of those things that mildly perturbs me, so I'm going to get it out in the open. It has to do with my occasional use of multiple prompts.
A few years back, I used a lot more prompts in creating my work than I currently do. I believe this was partly because of ADHD and partly because of a lack of confidence in my abilities. Whatever the case, the prompts helped inspire me, as they still do.
One fellow, and I'm not going to name names, wrote an entire post about not understanding people who see the need to use multiple prompts.
These days if I use more than one prompt it's because the first prompt may spark an idea but I need more to help the idea manifest. So, I roll down my list of prompt sources until I find what I need to work my magic.
I'm explaining shit anyway because I'm sick of this foolishness nibbling at me.
My dude, what difference does it make how many prompts another poet does or doesn't use in the creation of his or her work? I'm not coming to your house, holding a gun to your head, and commanding you to use more prompts or else. I fail to see why someone else's process differing from yours would be cause for writing an entire dissertation on the subject.
Anyway, I thought of this because I used three prompts in creating this poem, and I don't apologize for it. If anyone just can't understand why I would do such a thing or thinks the use of multiple prompts is akin to setting my neighbor's house on fire or strolling down the street naked with a strip of toilet paper clenched between my butt cheeks, perhaps consider that maybe this is a you problem.
I have real problems to occupy me. I couldn't give a gnat's fart in a category five hurricane how many prompts someone who isn't me uses to accomplish their writing.
Here's a tune that never goes out of style.
Friday, May 26, 2023
A Sonnet for my Father
Poetry; a unique and beautiful way to express feelings and ideas. Weaving words into perfect poetic prose, these authors remind you of your childhood, bring comfort from the hardships of life, fiercely spur emotions, and tell tales of old. All lovers of poetry will find a favorite here!
Featuring poetry by the following authors: John Grey, Kellee Kranendonk, J.E. Feldman, Debbie Hadow, Nina Padolf, Dibyasree Nandy, Brianna Witte, Nnadi Samuel, Rhiannon Bird, Sunayna Pal, Christopher R. Muscato, Vanessa Bane, Edward Cody Huddleston, Prathyush Devadas, Ed Ahern, and Cara Hartley.
Snippet
A Sonnet for my Father
Easter was a holiday you treasured,
I think dinner was your favorite part.
There was magic that remains unmeasured,
Muted even before you did depart.
Sometimes things we tend to take for granted
Are what we miss when they have gone away.
Hopefulness by longing supplanted
Sorrow fills emptiness upon this day.
In all my time I never will forget
The lessons you tried to impart to me.
I try not to live life filled with regret.
Sometimes tears are the only thing I see.
Thirteen years have passed since you flew away.
My heart is full of things I did not say.
For my father
May 31, 1936 – November 28, 2010
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Notes
Look, y'all, I try not to do it, but this post is being linked in multiple blog hops. I just got through doing a major rewrite of a story to be included in the forthcoming Hot and Sticky anthology from Passionate Ink. Since my past submissions to anthologies have either been met with a "you're in" or a "no thanks," this experience was a little unsettling. I was told the story had good bones but lacked emotion. That's not what anyone wants to hear, is it?
I realized that my over-the-top reaction was connected more to experiences in my past than it was to my present circumstances. When I finished the rewrite, I felt like I had a better story. I don't really have time to create separate posts for multiple blog hops and this post works with three of them, so, here we are.
Friday, December 2, 2022
First and Last Memories: WEP Challenge
Tuesday, November 29, 2022
November PAD Challenge 2022: Day 29: A Quintet of Couplets
I
I feel just like a banyan buried in the snow
What the hell a banyan is I can't say I truly know
II
What kind of nightmarish choices will we have in the next election?
Someone with more brains than a turnip would be a good selection.
III
I wonder if I jinxed myself at some point in the past
So many wishes I wished on stars never came to pass.
IV
I wonder where my soul will go on the day my ashes scatter
Will I be off on a new adventure, or will it just not matter?
V
The letter in the envelope challenged me to choose between truth and dare
I put it aside for later, procrastinating without a care.
~Ornery Owl Has Coupled (or Coupleted)~
Image by Chiplanay on Pixabay
https://pixabay.com/illustrations/owl-bird-animal-hand-writing-5070039/
notes and prompts used
BANYAN
TURNIP
JINX
SCATTER
ENVELOPE
Yeah--I deviated from the prompt.
"Titles?" scoffed I. "Pish! I shall use these words in my couplets!"
https://imprompt.wordpress.com/2022/11/29/day-29/
Write some couplets.
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Wednesday, November 9, 2022
November PAD Challenge 2022: Day 9: Life Under the Three of Swords
My late father sometimes reminded me of a day when we traveled to the Happy Jack recreation area. My family lived in Laramie at the time. My father was attending the University of Wyoming and was also earning his keep as a teacher’s assistant. My father told me that I stood up on a ridge and shouted to the wind, “I’m happy!”
I may have been happy. I honestly don’t remember the incident or the place. I can recall moments from that year, 1968. I remember some of the dreams I had. I seemed to be nothing but trouble for my mother. I was an overly curious child who was always getting into things.
My lifetime has been spent beneath the shadow of the Three of Swords. To put this in poetic terms, I’ve always been melancholy in varying degrees. If I were to choose poetry to describe my life, the first poem I’d select would be Alone by Edgar Allan Poe. I was reading Poe’s works at six years old and I related to this poem. I also loved The Goblin Market by Christina Rossetti. What would it be like, I wondered, to have a sister who was such a dear friend that she would put herself in danger to rescue me from the goblins who were draining me of my joy?
I did not have a sister. I had friends here and there, now and then, but they always left. I loved creating, but it wouldn’t be until later in life that I reconciled myself to the fact that my stories were my constant companions. I was not destined to have lasting friendships or find happy ever after romantic love.
To put it in clinical terms (alas, how very dull!) I have always lived with varying degrees of depression. I’ve been told I should medicate away the Three of Swords. Attempts at doing so failed spectacularly. The Tower fractured beneath me, plunging me into madness.
I can exist beneath the shadow of the Three of Swords. When the swords increase to nine or ten, atmospheric conditions present danger not only to happiness but to my very corporeal existence.
directionless me
spinning twilight I wander
without any guide
Wednesday, November 2, 2022
November PAD Chapbook Challenge 2022 Day 2: Sweet Sugar Skulls

Monday, September 26, 2022
30 Days of Haiga 2022: For David
text
ending an era
the spark has gone from his eyes
to where does it fly?
notes
With the passing of my ex-father-in-law last night, my son now only has one grandparent: my mother.
My ex-father-in-law had developed dementia, something he always hoped wouldn't happen. My ex-husband and his live-in helper were discussing the possibility of putting "Scooby" in long-term care because his state of health had declined so sharply that they could no longer adequately provide for his needs by themselves.
My ex-father-in-law was a retired engineer and there was nothing he loved more than doing puzzles. Sorry, but those clickbait "articles" proclaiming that one can stave off dementia give false hope and make me angry. This man was probably smarter than all of us reading this post combined. He still wound up with dementia.
If you'd like to read more of my rant about awful clickbait proclaiming magical cures that don't exist plus ways to support real research that does exist, follow the link.
http://www.naughtynetherworldpress.com/2022/09/charity-sunday-fisher-center-for.html
I didn't have an especially close relationship with my ex-father-in-law but there was no bad blood between us. There is none between my ex-husband and me either. After our divorce in 1994, we repaired our friendship, which I think helped make my son's childhood a little more stable if sometimes chaotic because of bouncing from house to house during the week courtesy of my crazy work schedule.
So, yes, it's the end of an era. The death of my ex-father-in-law wasn't unexpected, and in many ways, it was a mercy. As Glen Campbell's widow said regarding dementia, it's better to die some other way. Still, one can't help but be a little sad. At least I can't.
I used the six-sentence story prompt to inspire this Haiga and wrote a three-sentence story followed by a lot of explanation.
https://girlieontheedge1.wordpress.com/2022/09/25/sundays-six-sentence-story-word-prompt-231/
Prompt word: Spark
I created the Haiga in Pixlr.com with a free-use image by Lê Nam on Pixabay.
https://pixabay.com/photos/light-streaks-spark-smoke-trails-6899357/
I selected this image because of its simplicity and because the light creates what looks like a face on the left side of the picture.
~Ornery Owl Has Spoken~
Saturday, September 10, 2022
30 Days of Haiga 2022: Her Majesty
text
such a clever girl
she kept her heart to herself
as wise women do
21 April 1926 – 8 September 2022
notes
sketch of the Queen
https://pixabay.com/vectors/britain-british-elizabeth-halftone-1296168/
memorial banner
https://pixabay.com/illustrations/queen-elizabeth-queen-of-england-7441728/
I did not use any other prompts for this Haiga. I wanted to create a tribute to honor Queen Elizabeth II. I felt that the black and white illustration would work nicely with black text art, which I created using Pixlr.com. I also used decorative elements from Pixlr.
To stave off accusations that my Senryu is flip, snarky, or a backhanded compliment, I assure you that my intent is none of the above. Because of the brevity of this poem form, I needed to distill my thoughts down to the most basic elements. As noted in Wikipedia, "Her cousin Margaret Rhodes described her as "a jolly little girl, but fundamentally sensible and well-behaved"."
I've always admired the Queen's thoughtful and level-headed approach to even the most difficult circumstances. I could never conduct myself in such a measured fashion. My blood runs much too hot. Although my public face is generally stoic and I don't tend to reveal much about myself, my stoicism has a bitter edge to it and when I do show emotion, I wear it all over the front of myself.
Sometimes the Queen was accused of being emotionless or robotic. I never perceived her that way. In her position, it is imperative not to show weakness. She was always dignified, much more so than I ever could have been in her situation. I would not wish to be royalty.
Although I am not British, Her Majesty was a source of comfort to me. She was a benevolent constant presence in an uncertain world. I hope I have conveyed something of the respect I feel for her in my creation.
You are welcome to use the Haiga but please credit Cara Hartley/Ornery Owl and provide a link back to this blog.
~Ornery Owl Has Spoken~
Sunday, July 31, 2022
Charity Sunday: Adams County Animal Shelter
I originally posted the following poem on this blog on 12 November 2020. It honors Lafayette and Trinity, who didn't get along very well. They were jealous of each other. However, they both got along with the brothers Leon and Raymond (both gone now as well) who served as a buffer between them.
Trinity died on 4 November 2016 from brain and lung cancer. As that was the same day that Donald tRump was elected, it is quite simply one of the shittiest days in history.
The poem also appears in my third poetry volume, December Mood. If you are smart enough to subscribe to my epic newsletter today, you will eventually receive a link to a free ARC of this epic collection. (Honestly, I'm still working on getting the new and better Naughty Netherworld News set up.)
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Every day I think of you
I remember what good friends you were to me
If you were the color of your spirit set free
I’m wondering what you would be
Lafayette, would this be you?
Did you become something like this when you rose away?
I thought that there would be more time to say
How much I love you every day

With your beautiful, expressive eyes
Would I recognize your new disguise?
If only I could be that wise

I walk through the darkness of my dreams
With eyes closed fast, not wanting to see
The hopelessness surrounding me
Knowing what I wish can never be
~cie~
Acknowledgments
Picture 1: A Haiga created by me. Please credit Cara
Hartley/The Real Cie
Picture 2: Beautiful You Are by Magic Love Crow
https://magiclovecrow.blogspot.com/
Picture 3: Delightful Donkey by Gina Morley
https://daydreambeliever-gina.blogspot.com/
Picture 4: Carnival Dreams by Shelle Kennedy
http://sunshineshelles.blogspot.com/
This post was created using these prompts:
November PAD Chapbook
Challenge prompt for 11 November 2020 (write a color poem.)
https://www.writersdigest.com/write-better-poetry/2020-november-pad-chapbook-challenge-day-11
Poets and Storytellers United Weekly Scribblings #45
https://poetsandstorytellersunited.blogspot.com/2020/11/weekly-scribblings-45-artistic.html
This poem was posted to these places:
http://poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com
https://lbry.tv/@poetryofthenetherworld:9
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