Wednesday, October 30, 2019

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Wednesday (3) + OctPoWriMo 2019: Day 30: Clarity


crystal brook
reflects the willow trees
birds sing their song
who I am is clear
where I'm going, not so much

~Yozakura & Cie~



Notes:
The Hokku stanza of this Tan Renga was written by Yozakura, the Unknown Haiku Poet. The Ageku (two-line) stanza was created by me. I married the Carpe Diem prompt and the OctPoWriMo prompt, and this Tan Renga is their baby.
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13 comments:

  1. Kim M. RussellOctober 30, 2019 at 2:28 AM

    Nicely done, Cara!

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  2. paeansunpluggedOctober 30, 2019 at 5:10 AM

    Love this!

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  3. grams ramblingsOctober 30, 2019 at 6:02 AM

    "Who I am is clear,
    where I am going, not so much" - Love that
    Thank you

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    1. Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost October 31, 2019 at 7:03 PM

      It's actually a better place than I've been in a long time. There's uncertainty, but also a bit of hope. I didn't think there was any of that left.

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  4. Beth CampOctober 30, 2019 at 7:23 AM

    "where I'm going, not so much" Love the humor and the truth. Says much if we can laugh our way into the unknown.

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    1. Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost October 31, 2019 at 7:04 PM

      If it wasn't for my sense of humor (which most people don't understand) I never would have survived this long. Thanks for visiting!

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  5. rudraprayagaOctober 30, 2019 at 8:41 AM

    Beautiful!

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  6. Angela van SonOctober 30, 2019 at 8:48 AM

    Good offspring.

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  7. Esther JonesOctober 31, 2019 at 9:11 AM

    Ooh, that last line is powerful.

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