Showing posts with label non-rhyming poems. Show all posts
Showing posts with label non-rhyming poems. Show all posts

Thursday, September 12, 2024

The Lessons of the Scarecrow 30 Days of Haiga 2024

 

Image by Willgard Krause from Pixabay

harmless and straw-stuffed
diabolic rural fiend
what is Scarecrow's truth?





Image by Holger Grybsch from Pixabay

Sometimes, an image is wonderful, but it isn't the right choice to convey your intent most effectively. This is true for both visual and written work. 

I initially selected the image of the friendly straw dolly-style scarecrow to illustrate my poem because I didn't want to use the stereotypical horror movie scarecrow. However, this image was not the most effective choice. The shadowy scarecrow figure's ambiguity perfectly conveys the poem's message. It's just a harmless old scarecrow hanging in a field--isn't it? The shadows seem malevolent, but that's just a trick of the light. Probably.

The right image at the right time brings power to your work, lending it a lasting impression. There's nothing wrong with the straw dolly. She can be repurposed. In fact, she will be my model for today's etching. She simply didn't bring the most evocative energy to my scarecrow poem.



I once read an essay about writing good Haiku. Unfortunately, the only thing that stuck with me from this article was that it referred to certain of its samples as "bad" rather than simply showing how they could be written more effectively. Nothing discourages aspiring artists, poets, and writers more than the fear that their efforts will be ridiculed. Shame is not an effective motivator. It is more likely to encourage a person to abandon their efforts than to spur positive changes. 

My scarecrow Haiku will never win any prizes. It probably breaks several rules of Haiku perfection. However, my motivation when writing it was not to win any prizes. I wanted to contrast the harmless scarecrow archetype with the horrific version and raise the age-old question: can you judge a book by its cover? Are scarecrows funny, floppy beings, or sinister creatures hiding wicked secrets? At the heart of it, my true motivation was to pair philosophical concepts with a bit of fun, and I believe I succeeded in that goal. 

I'm not going to do a combination post this time. This post will work nicely for my Substack and as a free post for my Ream channel. 

While I am still committed to the 30 Days of Haiga project, not all 30 days will take place in September. Because of other commitments, I am taking the pressure off myself by making this a quarter-long project rather than a month-long one as I've done in years past. If I write the last of my 30 annual Haigas in December, it's fine.

I'm still learning to pace myself rather than beating myself up for being unable to comply with the too-ambitious goals I tend to set for myself. I consider this decision a win. Creativity should be enjoyable rather than feeling like horrible homework. 

~Ornery Owl Has Spoken~

Image by LoneWombatMedia from Pixabay

Scarecrows and I have something in common; we're both outstanding in our field. 

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Sunday, September 8, 2024

Cold Crow and Drab Duck 30 Days of Haiga 2024

 

Image by Alexa from Pixabay

either cold or hot
crow is a dish best not served
choose your words wisely

The prompt put me in a Senryu state of mind.



I know this bird is actually a raven. But it makes a nice stand-in for a crow on its nice, snowy background.

Image by Bianca Van Dijk from Pixabay




Mandarin Duck

Image by Yana Vakulina from Pixabay

mandarin she-duck
beautiful in her own way
despite drab feathers

The Prompt:




Image by eriko okuno from Pixabay


I believe the only place you'll see ducks like these is when taking a trip, and I'm not talking about going for a drive to the local pond in your car.

Do you pity the female Mandarin duck because nobody compliments her drab plumage? I don't. I wish I could be more like her.

When I was younger, I thought I wanted men to be ga-ga over my looks. I was also very conflicted about my body. I hated it when my hips developed but I wished I had bigger breasts. I hated it when gross men whistled or shouted at me from car windows or construction sites, but I wanted the guys my own age to want me. 

I never had the kind of looks that would have made me a sex object. I had a big butt and thighs with a modest chest. My face was "too round" even when my weight was "proportional to my height." I had cosmetic work done on my chin and teeth to make my face more conventionally attractive. 

After having liposuction on my chin, my delightful boss at the airport clothing store told me I should get something done about my "chipmunk cheeks." As she said this, she pinched my cheeks. I was too astounded to say anything. My face was bruised and puffy, I had a compression bandage wrapped around it to help reduce the swelling, and this maniac was pinching my cheeks. This is one of those times where there simply were no words. 

As I got older, I attracted attention because I have the "wrong kind" of body. I have the kind of body where everyone thinks it's their right to tell me how I should change my body. I think it's my right to tell them all to fuck off. 

Unlike my younger self, I don't want to be noticed for my looks in any way, whether it's positive or negative. I look different, so my looks attract attention. I want my creations to get noticed, not me. 

Peter Frampton once said he didn't understand why photographs always focused on his face when it was his hands that made the music. Phil Lynott said that even though he didn't encounter serious racial prejudice (his mother was Irish and his father was from Guyana) he was, nevertheless, aware that he was "other," and it bothered him. 

I resonate with both of these thoughts. What difference does it make if I look like a Playboy centerfold or if I look like a Playhutt centerfold? I'm not a pinup girl, I'm a poet and writer. You don't have to see me to read my words. If you're thinking about me rather than what I've written, either you're a stalker or I need to improve my technique.

As for being "other," I spent decades trying to change my appearance because I thought I looked ugly.

I may never have been beautiful, but I didn't look ugly. I looked like an East European peasant with my round face and stocky body. If that's not your thing, that's fine. I'd never try to force anyone to pretend they think I'm beautiful. 

Here's the thing, though. If you behave like someone not resembling your ideal bed partner is presenting a personal affront to you simply by existing, you, not they, are the problem. Not being attracted to someone is not a reason to treat them like garbage. 

Rather than seeing people's appearances as attractive or ugly, I see them as attractive or neutral. It's a person's behaviors that make them seem ugly, not an asymmetrical face, wonky teeth, the size of their body, or any other external factor.

~Ornery Owl Has Spoken~

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Friday, September 6, 2024

Final Market of the Year and Hawks 30 Days of Haiga 2024

 

Image by G.C. from Pixabay

browsing unique gifts

final market of the year

in a lengthy life

The Prompt:

https://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2012/12/carpe-diem-69-year-market-toshi-no-ichi.html


I ran the photo through several filters. I really like the stark contrast between the light and shadows. 


Here's the image I (ahem) DREW inspiration from for today's etching.


I had no idea scratching out a bunch of gnomes and other weird things would take so long. I don't think I'll be etching a hawk today. Maybe tomorrow. 

Red tail hawk by Jim Black on Pixabay

out on the prairie

hawks perching atop fenceposts

watching for a meal

The Prompt:

https://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2012/12/carpe-diem-70-hawk-taka.html


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Friday, December 1, 2023

Last Night Flight

 

Image by StockSnap from Pixabay



upon my last night
I will take flight into space
becoming a star

notes

Write a last night poem.

I decided against back-dating this one. 

This year I'm writing not one but two remix poems, the first one starting with my first poem from this year's challenge and the second one starting with the last. 

November was a stressful month. I'm not sure December will be much better, but I'll be striving to unfuck some fuckery. 

~Ornery Owl Has Spoken~

Image by Gerry from Pixabay


Free use image by Gordon Johnson on Pixabay

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Wednesday, November 29, 2023

Get Free

 

Image by Martin Str from Pixabay


it's time to get free

rise above limitations

become your true self

notes

https://www.writersdigest.com/write-better-poetry/2023-november-pad-chapbook-challenge-day-29

Write a (blank) free poem.

It's a good day for a simple Senryu.

I added text art to the base image using Pixlr.

New stickers with this design are available now at Ornery Owl's Underground. 

https://www.zazzle.com/get_free_sticker-256781550440488444

My stickers are currently $5.44 for each sheet of 20. The normal price is $7.25 per sheet of 20.


Free use image by Gordon Johnson on Pixabay

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Tuesday, November 28, 2023

Seize the Day, Survive the Day

 

Image by Soufiene goucha from Pixabay

always go boldly

seize each opportunity

unforgettable


don't draw attention

always keep your own counsel

lead a quiet life

notes

https://www.writersdigest.com/write-better-poetry/2023-november-pad-chapbook-challenge-day-28

Write a seize the day and/or survive the day poem.

Done and done.

Me no likey the changes Pixlr has made to their interface. I would much rather have the photo search option to find quality images on Unsplash rather than just the AI creator. Boo, stinky!

 Anyway, I do have a set of stickers with this poem and image available from Ornery Owl's Underground. Click the link to buy 'em!

https://www.zazzle.com/sticker-256299140824968774


Free use image by Gordon Johnson on Pixabay

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 SA: Adaptations must be shared under the same terms.

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