At the End of Everything Version 10
Photoshop Manipulation by The Real Cie
Your changing blue eyes
Hypnotize
I fell into your soul and drowned inside
You'd think I'd realize
No-one will ever hear my cries
I can't escape your frozen eyes
I keep telling myself lies
I keep telling myself that I
Don't still have the blues
For your eyes
~Cie~
Song Inspirations:
Love the Gary Moore song and that last verse...👌🏼
ReplyDeleteThank you. Nobody could make the guitar cry quite like Gary did. A great talent gone too soon.
DeleteYou are welcome. Couldn't agree more about Gary. What a loss!
DeleteThis is sharp and punchy. Nice.
ReplyDeleteThank you. :-D
DeleteThis reads like a song!
ReplyDeleteI was primarily thinking of the Gary Moore song when I wrote it, and then the line from the Rainbow song came into my mind as well. It then translated from my brain to the page!
DeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteKind thanks. :-)
DeleteWonderful! Thanks for sharing.
DeleteYour poem captures both how we become entranced by those we love -- and perhaps how we perhaps can't see the risks of being 'frozen' in a relationship.
ReplyDeleteSoulful and lyrical. Made me wish there was more. :)
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