Wednesday, June 5, 2019

Troiku Challenge 2019 #4: Spring Snow

Spring Snow

spring snow
purifies earth and heaven –
our enemies perish

spring snow
hearing the army's approach
grows red with spilled blood

purifies earth and heaven
the god of war triumphant
the bodies burning

our enemies perish
we see our enemy's face
when looking in glass

Mizuhara Shûôshi & Cie



Notes:
The "sleigh" in this grim Troiku was written by Mizuhara Shûôshi (9 Oct 1892–17 July 1981) . The three horses of the Apocalypse were created by me.


3 comments:

  1. I thought this one was tricky, but you’ve pulled the sleigh to life with your three horses of the Apocalypse! The imagery is powerful, especially in the first stanza, with the contrast of snow and blood, and the burning bodies in the second stanza.

    ReplyDelete
  2. in wars, such as they are, we most often do end up seeing ourselves reflected back - such as the cycles are -

    ReplyDelete
  3. You created an exciting short story with your Troiku.

    ReplyDelete

We love comments, with three caveats.
Be cool, Fool.
Don't be rude, Dude.
Don't be a prick, Slick.
That's all, Saul.
I try to get comments published as quickly as possible. I don't always reply to comments on my blog, but I do try to visit as many people as possible when I participate in blog hops and I share links where possible to Twitter, Facebook, Pinterest, and such so others can discover your work. I do read and appreciate your comments.