I need to be more open, I am told
Not to keep my truth a secret, to be bold
Not to be introspective, to reveal
Every thought I think and feeling that I feel
But when I follow this advice, then all I find
Are those who say: don't be quick to speak your mind
You must maintain an air of mystery
Don't be in a hurry to set your secrets free
Have an open heart but don't wear it on your sleeve
Don't let the sun catch you crying, no-one wants to see you grieve
Be real and true and honest, but don't be an open book
Don't keep your light hidden inside, let the world have a look
With all this conflicting information
I just want to catch the train and leave the station
~Cie~


Thus far, and no further...says who? Good one :)
ReplyDeleteThank you. :-)
DeleteI like the contradictions, life is full of contradictions, indeed! great poem, Cara :)
ReplyDeleteThanks. :-D
DeleteThis is fantastic! I feel like this so often.
ReplyDeleteI have at times been criticized for being too open and too closed by the same person at different times on the same day! It's baffling.
DeleteSociety couaght red handed... May I share it on my Facebook page?
ReplyDeleteOf course. :-)
DeleteDone, finally. Thank you!
DeleteCara, I enjoy reading your writes. It has that personal touch which a few can manage to write.This one is powerful.
ReplyDeleteThank you. There is something to be said for being open and honest. I guess whether what is said is positive or negative is up to the person saying it!
DeleteYeah. I hear you. So many mixed messages out there.
ReplyDeleteAlways! It's frustrated me from the time I was a child. Be honest--but not TOO honest!
Deletesing your life's song, how, where, and when you wish
ReplyDeleteSometimes I sing it inside myself because I don't want people asking about it. ;-)
Delete:) I know exactly how you're feeling! You can't please everyone! People are some of the most complicated beings on the planet.
ReplyDeleteTrue that!
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