Quiet People Have the Loudest Minds
I
In an industry that praises a man for being a blackguard
You refused to behave like a swine
You were tolerant, but not amoral
You chose to cleave to what you deemed important
Refusing to be some sort of cog in the machine
Your voice was an understated baritone
Your style in no way operatic
You preferred to let your axe do the talking
Coming up from a humble background
You led the poor in a quiet revolt
By teaching us to be unashamed of who we are
If anyone had ever referred to you
As a knight riding in on a white horse
You would have laughed
But you were a hero to many of us
We saw you as strong in spite of your diminutive stature
Which is why we were shocked when it was revealed just how fragile you are
There was no antecedent to predict
How swiftly and fearfully you would be felled
II
When I found out the reason
Why the world would never again hear your restless thoughts poured out in music
It made me shiver and sway
My soul was left a jittering mess
Tumbling into a sick, hellish abyss
My heart landed in the basement
And there is no consolation
Nor any chance for denial
My eyes are swollen from crying
Everybody knows that something's wrong
I never was any good at hiding behind a mask
This is the worst, the absolute worst
Because not only are there no expectations for recovery
There's nothing left of what you were in your head
Although the curtain's not yet drawn on vital functions
The obituary for your soul's been read
I thought it might be whiskey that would take you in the end
She was the one mistress you had trouble resisting
Because she temporarily quieted the voices of self-doubt
That screamed behind your placid demeanor
Quiet people have the loudest minds
I loved yours
Love it still
Love it always
Cie and Mo
for
Malcolm
Writing Prompts:
Notes:
Morella La Muerte (Mo) is the primary writer on the first poem, The Real Cie is the primary writer on the second.
Mo wanted to use the words from both Wordles but became overwhelmed. She emailed Cie asking for advice. We've been collaborating since five this morning! Three point five hours in, we've finally got it cooked to delicious imperfection.
Delicious imperfection could also describe the subject of the poem, although that sounds kind of lecherous. We actually are referring to his personality. He was flawed, but extremely well-intentioned. He created wonderful things without knowing just how wonderful they were. He was also extremely hard on himself. He never measured up to his own exacting standards.
I doubt we'll ever stop writing about this situation. We certainly will never stop thinking that it's a steaming pile of crap on the part of the Universe. We'd have been sad to have the man killed off, but to destroy his mind on top of it, that's fucking insult to injury. His was a beautiful mind. The world has been robbed of a real treasure.
Ignoring the fact that we have to get a spotlight over here because Angus is taking off his clothes again, could we just for a moment pause and ponder the absolutely solid foundation of this very tasty blues-rock number?
Angus spoke about his admiration for Malcolm's style in a January 2014 article from Guitar World:
"Sometimes I look at Malcolm while he's playing, and I'm completely awestruck by the sheer power of it. He's doing something much more unique than what I do-with that raw, natural sound of his. People like Malcolm, Steve Cropper, Chuck Berry and Keith Richards-they're all doing something better than the rest of us. I can't deny that Eric Clapton's and Eddie Van Halen's lead stuff has influenced a stack of people, but for me it's the rhythm thing that's way more impressive and important to a band.
Malcolm is a big inspiration to me; he keeps me on my feet. Even when I'm tired from running around the stage for two hours, I'll look back at what he's doing and it gives me that boot up the backside I sometimes need."
Absolutely.
What a great loss, not only to the world of music, but to the world as a whole.
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