First my poem, then an explanation and a sample.
Night Shift
People think I'm crazy to work
Night shift, as if only a jerk
Would work at this time on the clock
I wonder why it causes shock that nights I work
I don't sleep well in the nighttime
Why is this considered a crime?
Somebody must work late at night
Why is it that others do slight the nighttime chime?
~Cie~
Likely not the best poem I ever wrote, but it does have a certain je ne sais quoi.
Florette
The Florette, created by Jan Turner, consists of two or more 4-line stanzas.
Rhyme scheme: a,a,b,a
Meter: 8,8,8,12
Fourth line requirement of internal (b) rhyme scheme, on syllable 8.
Like the outgrowing of a small flower, the forth line of each stanza is longer, and enwraps the previous lines. Line #4 requires an internal rhyme scheme that rhymes the eighth syllable with the end of line #3, and continues to add on four more syllables than the other lines so that the fourth line ends rhyming with lines #1 and #2.
Example:
The Healing (For Emily)
Perhaps you’d say she slept away
another long hot summer day,
but she’s been fiercely knitting bones...
so silence all your undertones that would dismay!
It might appear she’s been undone
but she could still give you a run!
You say she gives impassive stare
but you are simply unaware that she has won.
You cannot judge her anyhow...
just see that sweat upon her brow
as silently she treads along
the path that comes with winter’s song; she can avow.
Her courage you can’t contemplate.
You say it’s simply just her fate
that’s kept her there, in reverie:
incognizant of bravery, you understate.
Copyright © 2009 Jan Turner
Very interesting poem structure. thanks for sharing.
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Thank you, Dahling, and thanks for visiting!
DeleteNever worked the night shift. Worked swing, though. It's an acquired taste.
ReplyDeleteSeems like a more traditional type of poem. Fun.
I never worked the night shift, but I pulled more than one all nighter in college, and not always for the purpose of studying! ;-)
DeleteNice florette! I blew the rhyme scheme in mine today, but oh well...
ReplyDeleteI just attempted a poetry type that I'd never heard of. It will appear on Thursday, I believe. I don't know if I got it right. The description was a bit vague.
DeleteThanks for stopping by!
Loving all these poetry forms! I've pulled a few night shifts. I made the mistake of reading The Shining on one of them. BAD idea.
ReplyDeleteMy cousin, a few friends and I went to a showing of Night at the Living Dead at the high school she attended. When we got out it was dark, and we had a couple miles walk. We all tried our best to scare the hell out of each other. It wasn't that hard to do after seeing that movie!
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