Monday, April 5, 2021

The First Fool

 


Guess I'm not the first fool to spin on my axel
Mad as a hatter over you
I can't help but magnify your glory
The hold you have on my heart feels like a vise

Yes, I let you trespass in my head
Take over my mind like an opium addiction
Blow out my brain with one sensual gesture
Terrorize me with your wicked caprice
I tell myself I need to remain elastic

By myself flooded with a cascade of desire
Staying home waiting for your call for months
I can taste the sweetness of you on my palate
How can I live without you any longer?
Hoping today you'll finally notice
Hating myself for loving you

Mad melodies marauding through my mind
Make me want to defy reality
How can I lift myself above this insanity?
All I want to do is fly to you
I need you now, don't make me wait forever

Bleeding my heart out trying to figure
Some way to sow the seeds of love in your soul
I wish I was worthy to dine at your table
How can I rise to your level when I'm so far below?
How can I put my name on the tip of your tongue?
How can I make your gorgeous voice sigh that you feel the same way as I?

~cie~

Write a "The First (blank)" poem




MLMM Wordle

Magnify

Opium

Elastic

Axel

Trespass

Palate

Sensual

Months

Caprice

Cascade

Gorgeous

Gesture


This prompt challenges you to find a poem, and then write a new poem that has the shape of the original, and in which every line starts with the first letter of the corresponding line in the original poem.

Well...

I didn't use a poem, I used a song: Hopelessly Devoted To You by Olivia Newton-John. I used the first letter of every line, but beyond that, I took a whole lot of liberties.

https://sundaywhirl.wordpress.com/2021/04/04/wordle-497/

Sunday Whirl

above

below

blow

defy

figure

fly

lift

sigh

sow

table

tip

wait

I used the image from this prompt, but this is obviously a lot more than three lines.

The Icky, Sticky, Nit-Picky Legalese If You Please (Or Don't Please)


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1 comment:

  1. HeeHee.
    Yoo funny.
    Wait! So am I!!
    (skuze me while I pat myself on d'back):
    ♡ en.gravatar.com/MatteBlk ♡
    Love you.
    Cya soon.
    be@peace.
    GBY

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