Like tearing of cloth
Lightning shreds across the sky
The sky remains whole
~Spectra~
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Friday, July 11, 2014
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Awesome haiku Spectra .... very nicely written and so well inspired on the haiku (and photo) by Shiki.
ReplyDeleteWelcome at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. I will already link your post to the Shiki-post, but you can see it after 7.00 PM (CET) when the linking widget will be active. Hope to see you here again.
Namaste.
Thank you so much! I've been having kind of a crap day, and you made me smile. Peace!
DeleteThis is gorgeous - I love that you've involved us on the sound of the sky, and the irony in its being torn and whole at that moment. Wow!
ReplyDeleteThank you, on behalf of Spectra. :-)
DeleteThe tearing can be menacing with flashes and roars though not all the time destructive! Nicely SG!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thank you, on behalf of Spectra. :-)
DeleteWhat a metaphor Spectra... Amazed at your imagination... Well written...
ReplyDeleteThank you, on behalf of Spectra. It's amazing what a person can create in a few short words! :-)
DeleteThe fabric of our lives - the sky,
ReplyDeletebriefly torn by sound and light,
and yet as you say, remains whole. ~Jules
Exactly! Thank you for visiting, on behalf of Spectra. :-)
DeleteWhat superb imagery. I really enjoyed this!
ReplyDeleteThank you, on behalf of Spectra. :-)
DeleteWonderful! Such a lovely piece!
ReplyDeleteThank you, on behalf of Spectra. :-)
DeleteI'll say I'm not a poetry gal, but I really like this. I like the sound of the words and the images they convay. Nice.
ReplyDeleteKind thanks, on behalf of Spectra. :-)
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