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Wednesday, October 17, 2018

OctPoWriMo 2018: Day 16: Bonded Eternally

Serab as a teenager

His twin brother Joub, slain at age 13 by Qweh's soldiers

Dearest, beloved brother
We were born in hell
Dearest, beloved brother
Never in peace to dwell
Scapegoated, seen as lesser
We were born in hell
Tortured by our oppressors
Nonetheless, we had one treasure
Scapegoated, seen as lesser
We had a blessing without measure
The bond that was between us
Nonetheless, we had one treasure
We had one another's trust
You sacrificed yourself for me 
The bond that was between us
From this grief I'll never be free
Dearest, beloved brother
Until your face I may once again see
Dearest, beloved brother

Serab
In memory of his brother, Joub
On the occasion of their sixteenth birthday


Notes:
Elf brother images purchased from 123rf.com
Creator information appears on the lower right corner of the angel and demon brother images.
Nerdy trivia, mostly for the benefit of the members of Team Netherworld.
Serab is a major character in Team Netherworld's long-running WIP, Fetch. He is the previous incarnation of the story's main male protagonist, Gerry Clifford.
In his most recent lifetime, Joub reincarnated as Gerry's younger brother, Paul. 
The brothers are platonic soul mates, who were originally the sixth and seventh sons of Lucifer. 

 Malak, the sixth son of Lucifer, later incarnated as Serab the Thief on Zecor (Zetar 6) and most recently as Gerry Clifford on Earth
Malak is of the Celestial order of Greater Spirits

Arion, the Seventh Son of Lucifer
Created by Lucifer from Malak's heartfelt wish for a best friend
Later incarnated as Joub, the twin brother of Serab, on the troubled planet Zecor 
Most recently incarnated as Paul Clifford
Arion is of the Infernal order of Greater Spirits







Thursday, April 16, 2015

NaPoWriMo 2015: Day 16: Terzanelle: Broke and Broken


She looks a bit like me. Lucky her.

Broke and Broken

Here's a story that makes me cry
I don't know prosperity at all
To me, the idea's a lie

When I'm scheduled I answer the call
I work hard to earn my pay
Spring and winter, summer and fall

I'm lucky I've a place to stay
I'd not get another if I lost it
My credit is so bad these days


Things don't look good from where I sit
I worry about my future life
Will there be anyplace I can even fit

I've rarely known anything but strife
I'm just a broke and broken soul
And yet I'm told to be excited about life

Life's just a march to the hole
Into which my broke body will lie
I want back the hopes and dreams that life stole
But I can't even afford tears to cry

~Blooming Psycho~


The Prompt:
And now for our (as always, optional) prompt! Today, I challenge you to write in the form known as the terzanelle. A hybrid of the villanelle and terza rima, terzanelles consist of five three-line stanzas and a concluding quatrain. Lines and rhymes are chained throughout the poem, so that the middle line of each triplet is repeated as the last line of the following triplet (or, for the last triplet, in the concluding quatrain). The pattern goes like this:
ABA
bCB
cDC
dED
eFE
fAFA or fFAA.

You can use any meter or line length, though you may want to try to have all of your lines in the same meter! (And you can always fall back on that old favorite, iambic pentameter).