Sunday, December 3, 2023

Condensed Poetry remix

Image by Azam Ishaq from Pixabay

rushing back to springtime days.

in a familiar setting

thankful I'm still here.

a mystery left behind

frozen and disconcerted

must face the winter.

trying to refresh

cold weather sets in.

stones of green

In a twist of the plot.

cold winds blowing from the north

for such small creatures

celebrate the tiny triumphs and hold on.


Celebrate the tiny triumphs and hold on.

For such small creatures

Cold winds blowing from the north

in a twist of the plot,

stones of green

cold weather sets in

trying to refresh--

must face the winter.

frozen and disconcerted

a mystery left behind

thankful I'm still here

in a familiar setting

rushing back to springtime days.

notes

I took the common lines from my two remix poem to make this.

Our brand new furnace isn't working, the technician won't return my calls, and I'm feeling very emotionally dysregulated.





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