Dark Hearts Love Too: OctPoWriMo 2017: Day 20: Firsts

Saturday, October 21, 2017

OctPoWriMo 2017: Day 20: Firsts

First love was a like
First kiss was gross and slimy
First time unwanted

Notes:

This poem is autobiographical to both Cie and Fetch's female protagonist, Pepper.

I don't want to spoil the stark nature of the piece by putting a long explanation here.

3 comments:

Angela van SonOctober 30, 2017 at 2:09 AM
I'll stop commenting for today, I don't want to be too much. Again: so few words, such a big story. It makes me silent.
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Angela van SonOctober 30, 2017 at 2:10 AM
Silent in as responding with no words, just feelings.
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Morgan DragonwillowNovember 1, 2017 at 9:06 AM
Innocence lost. I feel this.
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