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Sunday, November 20, 2022

November PAD Challenge 2022: Day 19 & 20: The Myth of Narcissus Explored In Verse

 


in the stick figure theatre
they watch the passion play
about the conflict between
Narcissus and Ameinias

but is not the conflict truly
between Narcissus and himself?

~ornery owl has spoken~


notes and prompts used



For today's prompt, take the phrase "The Myth of (blank)," replace the blanks with a word or phrase, make the new phrase the title of your poem, and then, write your poem.

Last year, Professor Ornery Owl explored the myth of Narcissus in great scholarly depth and detail. You can read her award-winning essay here.


To recap the relevant portion of the essay, in the Greek mythographer Konon's version of the Narcissus story, a young man named Ameinias falls hopelessly in love with Narcissus, telling the self-satisfied chap he can't live without him. Narcissus sends Ameinias a sword and Ameinias uses said sword to dispatch himself, beseeching Eros to avenge him before he dies by making Narcissus fall in love with someone he can't have.

Later, Narcissus falls in love with his own reflection in a pool of water. Distraught that he cannot touch the flawless specimen of manhood before him, he starves to death as he gazes at his reflection. Following his death, he transforms into a beautiful flower. 

Image by Hans from Pixabay
A flowing field of Narcissi, aka Daffodils.


Prompt: For today's challenge, write a conflict poem.

There is conflict expressed in every version of the Narcissus myth. Konon's version certainly goes above and beyond the call of duty in the field of conflict, but I postulate that in any version of the story, the real battle is between Narcissus and himself. 


Prompt: Stick Figure Theatre

I molded this prompt to suit my needs. Please follow the link and read the post written by the blog hostess. It is wonderfully unique!

sharing with


I wasn't originally planning on sharing this with a blog hop, but it ended up being a perfect fit. The poem has six lines and the requisite number of sentences for sharing a snippet with Rainbow Snippets is six sentences, one sentence for each color of the rainbow. 

Rainbow Snippets is a weekly blog hop where participants come together to share LGBT-themed work. Konon's version of the Narcissus myth is unabashedly homoerotic. I wrote a story earlier this year exploring this version of the myth for potential inclusion in an anthology. 

And now, our playlist.


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Saturday, February 5, 2022

Sixfold Needs Writers #MFRWAuthor #MFRWHooks #8Sunday #SnipSun #RainbowSnippets

  

Image by christoph_mschrd from Pixabay

Hello fellow writers! I wanted to let you know about Sixfold, the fiction and poetry journal where writers choose the winners. https://www.sixfold.org/

The first round of the competition/writing workshop was supposed to start on February 1st, but it will begin on May 1st instead to get more participants on board. You can enter a piece in either the fiction or poetry category or one piece in both categories. The deadline on the website says January 24th, but they have extended it until April 24th to allow more participants to enter. You can read more about the requirements here. https://www.sixfold.org/howitworks.html

Your story can be up to 5000 words long. I entered my contentious Three Time Travelers piece and a poetry manuscript. 

I am not affiliated with Sixfold except as a participant. I'd just like my fellow writers to know about this opportunity. It's hard to find fellow writers to bounce things off (most are too busy with their own work) but it can be really helpful. I recently made exponential improvements to one of my stories thanks to advice from a fellow writer. I haven't yet made enough income off my writing where I can afford an editor and I sometimes run into the old forest/trees and horse/zebra conundrums when working as my own editor.

If anyone reading this ever wants to do a story for story trade (you show me yours and I'll show you mine) I'm up for it. I've wanted to form a friendly and supportive critique group for a while now but I have a hard enough time managing my own so-called schedule, let alone a group, so it would be a loose and casual affair as opposed to something properly managed. Having ADHD is rather like having The Joker manage your business only without the crime sprees. It's wacky, it's colorful, and you'll often find yourself in interesting places wondering how the hell you got there.

So, yeah, that's about it. Check out Sixfold and hit me up in the comments if you want me to take a look at a chapter or story and give possibly helpful suggestions that you can either accept or reject. 

Folks, I am working through some anxiety issues and am doing better this month than last, but am still having some struggles. I don't expect comments on this post. I will try to comment on as many of yours as I can, but please don't take it personally if I don't. It's not you, it's me.

~Ornery Owl Has Spoken~



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Sunday, December 12, 2021

Cheeky History with Ornery Owl: Sympathy for Narcissus #RainbowSnippets #SnipSun #8Sunday

 

A Pompeiian Fresco depicting Narcissus

The following snippet is from the piece that I wrote for this month's WEP challenge.

Genre: History, humor, politics

The ancient Greek mythographer Konon's dark, homoerotic version of the myth of Narcissus takes place in the Greek city of Thespeia. In Konon's version, Narcissus scorns even Eros, the god of love himself.

A man named Ameinias falls deeply in love with Narcissus, but Narcissus spurns Ameinias and sends him a sword. Overcome with sorrow, Ameinias asks Eros to avenge him and commits suicide using the sword that Narcissus sent him.

Later, Narcissus falls in love with his own reflection in a pool of water. He becomes distraught because he is unable to touch the beautiful man that he sees in the pool. 

There is still time to enter a work of your own in the challenge. I will provide the link below. Poetry or prose, any genre except for erotica, 1000 words or less.


Please note that the date on the badge is incorrect. Submit your work any day until the 15th of December.

I wasn't planning on doing a Rainbow Snippets share this month (and may not have done a Sunday Snippets or Weekend Writing Warriors either) because I've been so busy. However, I especially wanted to share this version of the Narcissus story with the folks at the Rainbow Snippets hop. I had never heard it before and thought that you might find it as interesting as I did. 

Hopefully, you'll enjoy the rest of the essay too. I think it's genuinely informative with a bit of a cheeky surprise ending. 

Your Informative Pal, Ornery Owl


Ornery Owl is here to school you.
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